It is a highly debatable issue that medical system developments result in higher life expectancy for people but also create negative impacts on their life. This essay will illustrate the reasons why drawbacks outweigh the advantages regarding to this issue.
First and foremost, in 21st century, mankind has developed an outstanding health care system which brings crucial benefits for citizens around the globe. A strong health care service ensure a healthy and productive society where most of the diseases could be detected and cured in a short time by modern technologies. Moreover, with technology developments people's life expectancy become longer is inevitable. Elderly people are like a book of wisdom, experiences and knowledge, lengthen their age could create positive impacts on the society. For example, longer life expectancy could generate extra time for elderly professors to finish their projects or share it with young generations.
However, there are significant disadvantages occur when people age become higher due to technology developments.Firstly, a huge amount of money spent on health care system to keep the elder live longer may cause financial shortage for another major aspects such as education or pollution. Secondly, population booming is a serious problem which directly affected by longer life expectancy. Our scare resources are running out due to excess population growth, more people means more water, food, medicines and space needed to manage a sufficient life. If no action was taken, the population has gone out of control for a long time.
In conclusion, there are several advantages of lengthen people life expectancy, however the disadvantages are way more serious and needed to take in our account immediately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...e higher due to technology developments.Firstly, a huge amount of money spent on health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48917748918 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99173978222 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658008658009 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8251735331 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180120069881 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727203631592 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438220872955 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116373935079 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351309863717 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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