What is the best invention of last 100 years; the computer, antibiotics, airplane, and explain
why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Recently, the phenomenon of the most significant invention and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the technological advancement is highly challenging, such issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that computers should be considered as a revolutionary invention, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, computers provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that influencing all aspects of our lives, as well as facilitating all tasks, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that the new applications, such as Skype or Facebook, revolutionized the way we communicate, and also they are highly beneficial in education, international business, and science. Hence, the beneficial ramifications of computers can be observed.
Within the realm of the technological advancement, the excess using of computers might exacerbate the consequences of being too reliant on technology. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of poor eyesight relate to the reality that the demerits of putting strain on eyes pertain to staring at the screens. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the severe health problems are correlated negatively with sitting in front of the computers for a long time. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of adverse effects of high technology.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I tend to profoundly believe that computers are the most remarkable invention in the contemporary world in comparison with other advancement, but it is recommended that it should be used under proper guidance and supervision to diminish its detrimental effects on people's health.
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- People pursue dangerous activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports, whitewater river rafting etc. Do you support? If yes, why and if not, why? 11
- Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 88
- It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. Agree or not? 11
- In most of the education systems, students are assessed by written examinations. Do you think it is a good idea or not? Give your reasons. 85
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western counties. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals? 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59803921569 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38519346483 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8503579846 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.727272727 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0311084477652 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00994066242905 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0113117050313 0.071462118173 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017725994084 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00434310497669 0.0609392437508 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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