Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living in a constantly changing world, our experience of life also changes nonstop as the society advances. Some people might find the alterations so bewildering that they become less pleasant or satisfied. As far as I am concerned, however, the rapid transformation offers us valuable opportunities to better enjoy life, materially and spiritually, hence virtually increases our sense of satisfaction. In the ensuing paragraphs I will elaborate my reasons for holding this view.
To begin with, the enormous improvement in productivity largely levels up people's living standard. As we are more capable of grow crops, produce commodities and construct public utilities, people enjoy the richness of material and convenience of transportation than they did in the past. This will definitely make life much easier and thus lead to the increase of satisfaction. For example, my parents could barely gain enough food to eat in their childhood while I actually never need to worry about food since my birth owing to the rapid development of productivity. And my father and mother always tell me how lucky and fortunate I am to born in this time. Clearly, people from last generation are more satisfied to live in the current era.
Moreover, the progress of technology, especially computer science in the last few years, greatly enriches people's mind. Ever since the wide spread of personal computers and cell phones as well as the popularity of social websites, people are granted with the privilege to reach out to a bigger world they never had before. In this way they are exposed to new and fresh ideas from different cultures. For instance, we could now get access to Japanese animation series, Hollywood commercial movies, and Scottish traditional music easily. While in the past, such spiritual enjoyment was limited.
Admittedly, some people might concern that we need to spend more time to adapt to this fast changing world and we are likely to lose ourselves in an overwhelming amount of information. However, with proper arrangement of time and methodical selection of data, this concern could be cleared up.
To put it in a nutshell, our world progresses at a speed nobody has seen in the precedent, which necessitates us to tackle the issues coming along with this situation. Nevertheless, as argued above, as long as we act accordingly and keep it up with the era, we will be more delighted and fulfilled thanks to the advancements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1175 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93324798645 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5943774621 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.736842105 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180296986671 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516470852985 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467522596713 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943312576966 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212706384732 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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