In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Nowadays, fast food has been a daily choice of people in our community, this type of food affect people's health negatively in many ways. I believes the authority should impose a higher tax and further actions should be taken to deal with this crisis.
It could be seen clearly that fast food is an important factor which causes health issues for citizens. In more detail, fast food contains excessive oil and the ingredients which toxic human's health slowly but seriously. Besides, less physical activities also is a factor leads to health problems such as heart and lung diseases. People are busy with the working schedule result in eating fast food and skipping daily exercises included gym, running and joking in order to help citizens to prevent or avoid fatal diseases. For example, 10 minutes of running daily could minimize 25% chances of getting a heart attack.
However, there are several actions could be taken by the authority to reduce the amount of fast food and improve the situation. First of all, impose a higher tax on fast food is understandable, and necessary for the restricting process. Higher price encourages people to abandon fast food and replace their food with organic or healthier products. Another possible recommendation which could solve this issue is encouraging citizens to do more physical activities. For instance, physical activities create positive impacts on human life through different approaches such as creating a healthy life style or keeping our body in shape as desired.
In conclusion, fast food and other factors contribute directly to health problems of people and there are several recommendations should be taken to deal with this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...oples health negatively in many ways. I believes the authority should impose a higher ta...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ive oil and the ingredients which toxic humans health slowly but seriously. Besides, l...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould be taken to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17153284672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65048195831 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3049588771 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336774769352 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126545714766 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815888740037 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216309976836 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226249506968 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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