Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Now a days many young adults has their view of the family as it is aware that living with family members is yet to their freedom. reasons for my viewpoint which are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first reason which immediately comes to my mind is that children must spend more time with their parents. They are the precious gift from almighty but in some cases, they passed away very early. Therefore we should spend as much time as we can because we do not know when they will leave us permanently. While some people think family is the obstacle to live independently, I believe they may advice youngs not to do something but it's for the good of that adult. Moreover, our parents feel alone if each of the children lives separately. For instance, I shifted to the dorm to get some independence but later I realized that parent's care is more important than freedom. Even though, nurses or other relatives may help them; the children can serve them better and they feel comfortable with own daughter or son.
The second and most important reason is we also need to feel peace and comfort and living with parents is the best place to get that as parents take care of their children with the best possible way. So, when they impose some rules, it is for the benefit of their children, to make them disciplined.
Last but not the least, we are indebted to them for every sacrifice they have made for us. They have given us birth and taught us to be self-dependent, raised us to be good human being. For all of the pacing cares, we need to stay with them so that we can take care of them also. They never abandoned us in our childhood, so why should we?
Admittedly, people can live another place for continuing a job or after getting married or some may leave their parents if their parents force them something that they do not like. Nonetheless, I firmly believe that young children should not stay away from their children just for getting independence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days many young adults has their view of the...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days many young adults has their view of the...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reasons
...family members is yet to their freedom. reasons for my viewpoint which are discussed in...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ome cases, they passed away very early. Therefore we should spend as much time as we can ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... live independently, I believe they may advice youngs not to do something but its for ...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., raised us to be good human being. For all of the pacing cares, we need to stay with them...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...h them so that we can take care of them also. They never abandoned us in our childho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58263305322 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42000271766 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1701409355 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148604111816 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566955808889 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365204647275 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862666406676 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505357186959 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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