extreme sports
In the modern era, there is an ongoing debate among the public around the world about the extreme sports while specifically strong arguments claim that have economic and cultural benefits, some luminaries dispute otherwise.
From a social point of view, the workout is indeed bound to well-being, which means it might lead to both decreasing stress and mental development. For example, a group of reputable scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between cure and reactions in the body as well as adventurous. Therefore, this presented thus far support the contention that trying new occasions is positively correlated with not only develop self-confidence but also overcome with sportsperson`s fears.
In psychological term, the adrenalin is undoubtedly attributable to reduce the depression rate, in that it would lead to life-threatening, addiction to sports, and serious injuries. A well-known example of such attribution is that rivalry which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking disturb body for granted. Had people gone gyms in advance, it might have had an opportunity to be in shape. Thus, changing juvenile lifestyle could play a significant role in future prosperities.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiments is that the benefits of legal and controlled sports far outweigh its drawbacks. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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- Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases This is one reason that people are living longer lives bow than they did in the past Discuss the effects this might have on society 71
- Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases This is one reason that people are living longer lives now than they did in the past Discuss the effects this might have on society 36
- extreme sports 85
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otherwise. From a social point of view, the workout is indeed bound to well-bein...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58299595142 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28233981969 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688259109312 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7759980347 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098979567911 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306869844103 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656172148123 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681737145896 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838315802707 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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