Extreme sports (Dangerous activities) like skiing, bungee jumping, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of extreme sports such as skiing, bungee jumping, rafting, diving and its corresponding impact has sparked the heated debate. Although contested by many that the matters of the banding extreme sports is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that dangerous activities can be a plus, and I will that investigate throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint dangerous activities like bungee jumping and skiing can provide the society with some noticeable effects that are rooted in the facts of merits of advantages of difficult sports, as well as rafting and diving, are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed in academic experiment which discovered the importance of international sports. Thus, beneficial ramification of Olympic sports are visible.
From the scientific point of view, doing difficult and dangerous sport exercise can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to this reality that demerits of many activities are implication. As s tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university described extreme activities.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of forbidden difficult activities is far outweigh of drawbacks. Not only, do the advantages of daily exercise prove the important of many difficult sports, but also the pinpoint possible implication.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69130434783 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09548424068 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5624216035 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241442554915 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719263221765 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661884186832 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126420424927 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708351278077 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.