Some people said the government should not spend money on building theatres and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of people who express concerns regarding the government's obligations. It is a controversial issue that the government should invest more in education and health care system than entertainment facilities. From my perspective, I just partly agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
Firstly, it is obvious that the government should give priority to investment on education and medical care because they play an essential role in the society. To be specific, national's sustainable development could be created only by an advanced education. Moreover, a qualified health care system would not only stabilize the society but also benefit the government from tax payments.
On the other hand, the government should not ignore the demand for the entertainment of society because it is one of the basic human needs. The fact is that the entertainment activities could increase the emotional wellbeing as well as enrich one's cultural life. To illustrate, children often be told folk stories, which include various moral values by their parents, that would feed their souls with beautiful things.
In conclusion, the government should give priority to investing in education and medical care. Nevertheless, they should also pay enough attention to entertainment facilities such as theatres and sports stadiums because an advanced country is judged by not only property but also the residential happiness.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- The elderly 61
- Do the government should focus only on the economy or not? 56
- The charts below show proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 78
- Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them. Instead, education and job training should be offered. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49107142857 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00127523916 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1740803621 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.818181818 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176872642037 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07081091403 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568098065575 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112780547588 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451734921011 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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