You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to the supervisior of department , describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the position of Software Engineer in your head company.
As you can clearly see from my resume I graduated from Queen Mary University of London with a masters degree in Business Management. I have been working as Computer Analyst for a long time in domestic company. I consider myself to be friendly, hard-working and perfect team member, moreover, not only my native tongue is English also I can speak fluent both German and Spanish language.
To be honest, I feel, I am suitable for this role as I have a great deal of experience in the Financial Management field.
As a result of these qualifications I am very keen on to work for an ambitious multi-national company such as yours.
I will be available for contact to speak other options, if you require further information please do not hesitate contact with me via cell-phone
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Your Faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ware Engineer in your head company. As you can clearly see from my resume I gr...
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Line 10, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hesitate contact with me via cell-phone I look forward to hearing from you in th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, i feel, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81656804734 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87385186535 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5630469634 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185653994076 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739355283204 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040410541048 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857077128229 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313464603267 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.