These days many children have difficulty concentrating and paying attention in schools.
What are the causes for it.
How can it be dealt with?
In this modern world there is competition in every field of life, and only those who are best will be successful. However, it is seen that grades of children is on a decline due to the fact that they are having difficulty paying attention and concentrating at class. This essay will examine the causes of this problem, and how can it be overcome.
To begin with, i believe there are several causes for it. First, and foremost is the fact that teachers nowadays lack freedom to discipline children, and reluctant to use force against children. Also, children do know this fact and, inturn exploit it as a for instance, we come across news where student sue teacher for using force which is sometimes necessary to teach manners. Another factor is lack of sound sleep due to the fact that many children spend hours on watching television and using mobile phones will not get adequate sleep. Lastly, nutritional factor also play a role in it as most of the children uses processed food which can lead to problems such as attention deficit disorder.
Having said this, it is possible to counter balance these variables by making simple moves such as regulating and limiting usage of electronic devices especially at night to ensure sound sleep. Apart from this, school administration must remove the processed food, and replace it with fresh vegetables and meat. Most importantly by giving extra freedom to teachers will greatly improve the situation, and possibly grades of children. For example, freedom to detain a child who misbehave or do not do homework properly.
To conclude, although there are large number of attributes responsible for this situation at schools, but effective measures can be taken to alter the current condition. In the future too, without adapting preventive measures the situation will get worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0495049505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61311537176 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610561056106 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5092582011 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260365278927 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826276815167 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665391334789 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138154721612 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601853897869 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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