At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The issue of whether a country will benefit from a relatively large number of young adults is really complex. Some people might think that young people are more energetic and contribute higher GDP of the country, while others might believe that older people with more experience can provide wise advises to others. This essay outlines two aspects to show way a larger number of young adults brings more advantages than disadvantages.
To begin with, although the elder may have more experiences and can share some wise advices to people, their experiences may not so useful in the modern society. For example, older people who were born much earlier before the technology revolution could not share how to use social media such as “FB” or “Instagram”. In addition, because younger individual usually have more innovative ideas than the older individual, it is crucial to invent better product and create new business model. Therefore, a country with more young adults can build a more creative society.
Furthermore, a population with relatively large number of young adults can contribute higher GDP growth. First, more young adults mean more people can joint labor market and increase national income. Second, old people who are retired normally live by spending their saving; however, it will not contribute the productivity of the country. Thus, the national economics will benefit from the population with higher proportion of young adults.
To sum up, in my opinion, the advantage of the situation outweigh the disadvantage because young adults compose a more innovative society and create a powerful economics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38372093023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83504015441 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1949494916 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233785171507 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096680834665 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074726951421 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147905501368 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474937497027 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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