How easy or difficult is it to hold on to fame for a young celebrity? Discuss
Today, whether in acting, modelling or sports, the world is full of children in pursuit of stardom. The drive for fame can partially be due to a parent’s unfulfilled childhood dreams or a child’s inner vision to become a celebrity. In my opinion, some children who attain fame go through experience that is emotionally unscathed, others are not as fortunate, but all should explore. This essay will discuss this issue further in the following paragraphs.
Fame is our society’s most powerful magnet that assures “super elite” status. The elite often grants an individual with credible appreciation, accessibility, tangible assets, and star power for a remarkable life. Also, technology has given access to young children, increasing avenues to attain stardom. In recent times, YouTube, Instagram, Musical.ly has created child prodigies and the possibilities are limitless. Thus, children chase the celebrity dream.
However, being famous often results in loss of privacy and loneliness. The stars are often judged. In addition, rumors, paparazzi, social media war are part of the package. Some youngsters have the natural ability to handle pressure to be perfect but for the vulnerable ones the fame game can be fatal. Child star, Selena Gomez suddenly placed her career on hold to deal with depression and anxiety. Fame gets you up the hierarchy, but isolation can be ruinous.
In conclusion, fame is fickle. If you mess up, you are always replaceable. The pressure to live up to the attention is huge but a talented child must manage and chose the pathway to spotlight. Fame is selective, worth the joy ride to embark on even if it is bumpy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ride to embark on even if it is bumpy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24626865672 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94061101453 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667910447761 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4288096394 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1052631579 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159904411461 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403512724564 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347940154757 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841300171566 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143199427694 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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