The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods.
To what extent do you agree?
It is an undeniable fact that a great number of people all around the world tend to use the same dresses and products using by other people. I completely agree with this point of view, and I will explain my support in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe that some people around the world prefer to wear same specific clothes as these kinds of dresses are often worn by well-known people like celebrities. The reason for this tendency is that some individuals think that if they used the same shirt as a famous Hollywood actor wear, they would attract more people surrounding, and this could lead to their confidence and help them stand out among their friends. For example, the coat worn by Johnny Depp in academy rewards in 2015 earns more than 2 million dollars for its designer since 200 million people around the world purchase this dress so far. This trend among people can definitely show that individuals are passionate about using clothes that are used by other famous people.
Furthermore, a lot of people tend to use some special brands due to their quality and popularity. That is to say, brands, such as Nike, Adidas, Reebok or Lotto are so popular among young people and athletes, and it is sensible to be used by wide range of people in the world. The main reason for this is that the quality of this goods are acceptable, and as result, people all around the world trust these shoes as the greatest footwear in the market. As a result, a successful product can encourage many people regardless of their nationality or culture in all over the world to use the same brand.
To sum up, in spite the fact that many there are various products out there, my firm belief is that due to individuals' passionate and the good's quality, people often tend to use identical products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69278996865 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39632567601 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2106124094 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.090909091 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0306814910209 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147811352986 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180301197174 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0183502190703 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108490417345 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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