Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Recently, the phenomenon of changing human behavior by law and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that passing a fine is highly detrimental, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that passing a law is a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the court standpoint, punishment can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that laws violation as well as committing a crime, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered horrible crimes. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both uploading laws and enforcing laws are apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of fairness, justice might increase the consequences of equality promotion. Moreover, Fundamental aspects of being a first time offender relate to this reality that demerits of an alleged rape pertain to the death penalty. as a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of being involved in an organized crime correlated negatively with the receiving a harsh sentence. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of enforcing laws.
To conclude, While there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that passing laws far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of passing fines prove the significance of citizens protection, But also pinpoint good behavior implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...fects which are rooted in the fact that laws violation as well as committing a crime...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rcing laws are apparently can be seen. Within the realm of fairness, justice mi...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...eged rape pertain to the death penalty. as a tangible example, a scientific resear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50592885375 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18892242028 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8856807316 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193012524185 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603641305844 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798344482093 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100505221203 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609559422842 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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