It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers, rather than food produced by ‘factory farming’ and transported long distances.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Food is a basic need for every human farmers produced food for earning money in my opinion food produced by farmers it is a good quality of food but the factory farming food is not a healthy food because it was and lots of chemicals in food I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs
there are many reasons why the people likes farmer food firstly this food is good and healthy food they do not grow with the addition of chemicals it is a hygienic food and the farmers food is a growth season and the seasonal food and healthy food some people think that every person is farmers good because it food provides many patterns and calcium in our body there are lots of ingredients are involved in farmers food they do not affect on our body because it is a chemical free body they do not harm anyone on body
secondly ,some people cotton bagstore the food on call stores in out of season they provide food in market in out of seasons but the food is shown it is a very healthy inside but it products a lot of chemical in food and their effect in many types on human body and factory store food is a produced in a whole country in a long distance because some people eat food without any thinking it is a season or not but the store for is fact too much on our body such as the carrot is do not grow on summer season but even the stores men were stored in stores and the provided they provide the carrot on summer season on marketing and some peoples by the food and after eat food they suffering in many facts on our body
The most of the captured in guest everyone has their own views I do not deny any of them but I could it it that the farmers food is good for for everyone they do not affect on our body
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14029850746 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04875742705 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379104477612 0.561755894193 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 335.0 20.2975951904 1650% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1387.0 106.682146367 1300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 335.0 20.7667163134 1613% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.0 7.06120827912 921% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226342071564 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226342071564 0.084324248473 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162542208408 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641412088609 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 165.6 13.0946893788 1265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -243.17 50.2224549098 -484% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 130.4 11.3001002004 1154% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.21 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.19 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 9.78957915832 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.0 10.1190380762 1344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 10.7795591182 473% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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