television impact on society is good or bad? discuss both the points and deduce to a conclusion.
It is irrefutable to say that due to the increase in science and technology people are more obsessed with the things they see on television. Many opine that, what people see and hear on any of the medium access and implement in the real life. While others disagree with the belief. In my point of view the impact of television is much more in the society and people get inspired by television in great extent. The following essay will discuss inevitable reasons why the influence of television has captured the mind and soul of people of this era, and deduce to a reasonable conclusion to assert my opinion.
To begin with, the greatest invention till date is television which has myriad information and has made the world a global village. With the press of a button millions of information are able to access. From news, serials, weather forecast, movies to what not all are at a click apart. In some way it has allocated some time for families to spend together in their living room with something to watch for all generations.
On the contrary people on the other side of the fence assert that, adolescence people are more into movies music and follow their favorite stars or bands in TV. This has caused them follow the footstep of those famous celebrities. It’s the age where you follow the steps of the person you like and violence, indulging in habits like drugs, alcohol and cigarette is also included.
To recapitulate, it is common for people to be influenced someone they call idol but the most prominent thing is they are influenced by the bad habits as well. Its the responsibility of the parents to look after their children whether they are opting any bad habits or are influenced by any to crime in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... access and implement in the real life. While others disagree with the belief. In my ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...something to watch for all generations. On the contrary people on the other side...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...aused them follow the footstep of those famous celebrities. It's the age where you follow the...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e influenced by the bad habits as well. Its the responsibility of the parents to lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70723684211 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57777018985 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6340024308 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114948018515 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344792962892 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677676114897 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573093437119 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629668038651 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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