It is important for school children to study music, art and sport as it is for them to become literature and numerate. How far do you agree with this statement? support your point of view with reasons and / or examples from your own experience.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, modern schools have adopted new learning system which obliges schools to teach music, art and sport. Some people believe that teaching these sciences have become mandatory and they are essential in children lives, while others argue that there are other important topics to be learned to the schools children which are considered more important, such as, mathematics, chemistry and physics. This essay will discuss the reasons why schools have to teach their students art, sport and music in similar to other essential topics.
Teaching topics, such as sport, art and music is essential because teaching these subjects will increase the talent at these children. Nowadays, the richest people are either singers or sport players. For example, there are a significant number of sport academic are established in different countries these days, which look after talent children. Therefore, schools should teach their children music, art and sport in parallel with other essential topics, such as physics and mathematics.
On the other hand, some people think that teaching art, sport and music in parallel with other essential topics may affect on children concentration. Children will consume little time on the important topics. For example, instead of studying mathematical 12 hours per week, they spend only five hours. These people are unaware of the fact that subjects such as music and sports are equally importance of other subjects. Thus, schools should adopt the system which obligates all students to learn sport, art and music in parallel of learning other essential topics.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why schools should teach their students art, sport and music. In my opinion, I believe that learning topics relate to music, sport and art is very important and it is the first step to become a singer or a sport player.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...arallel with other essential topics may affect on children concentration. Children will c...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to sport'
Suggestion: to sport
...m which obligates all students to learn sport, art and music in parallel of learning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28239202658 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43404403596 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478405315615 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8288051451 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218180492525 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967672317709 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033945632818 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162399138565 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118609351142 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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