some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important and too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been ratified that, continuous sharing of data in different fields like scientific or field or academic researches is of magnificent importance. Other people constrain that, advanced information can't be priceless. Although both views have their own believes, but I support the idea of sharing as much information as we can freely, and will discuss both views in this essay.
some inventors, researchers and businessmen assert that, if they spread their new discoveries and advanced data freely, this will affect their income. They believe that,if people purchase for their information, they will provide a great source of money. This could be partially right. But on the long run, those who share researches for free,their names will be carried with their products, and so they will become known and recognized by different nations. Hence, scientist and researchers from all the world may come to consult them and offers will be presented for their participation. This is a great window of opportunity.
Moreover, this sharing will help their mates in the same field to learn about their discoveries and so will push their performance. Looking at the great picture, it could be depicted that, this will help many societies and will improve their live qualities indeed. To illustrate, Wikipedia is one of the greatest encyclopedia nowadays as it provides a great source of information in different fields.
Furthermore, more sharing means more encouraging for other competitors to invent and share their own data. Nevertheless, this will promote better better working field. For instance, when my friend published a new paper about her research freely in the college's journal, couple of her mates did the same later.
To conclude, although sharing information freely has some disadvantages, but its benefits indeed outweighs its drawbacks. It will eventually improve whole world and will encourage discovering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41528239203 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87095863876 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1433539688 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205232587975 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071375851182 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608185716879 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132260614904 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872765803397 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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