University education benefits
University education potentially brings myriad benefits for students in many spheres of life. Although,
some pople continue university education to gain new experiences, to enhance skills, knowledge and to gaurantee
bright career. In my opinion, graduating from university open up future job options and ensures
job security. I would like to explore reasons for holding this opinion.
First, specialized degree acquired from university is imperative prerequisite to obtain
high paying job. As, students graduating from high school and other diploma courses do not
possess distinct skills to operate highly reputed instituations may end up in getting low
paying job. Unlike past ever increasing cost of living makes it very diffiult to meet
daily expenses. In order to feed aspirations of modern competitive world, it is indpensible
to pursue higher education. For intance, when I was
in last semester of high school, I explored for the future job options. I was amazaed
to see that there were hardly any employment requirement for high school graduate entry level
positions. After scrutizing plethora of future prospects of the para-medical field Physical Therpay,
I desperately wanted to begin that program in famous university of my city Ahmedabad.
After finsing degree, I got hired for permanent full time postion as Physical Therapist and generating
enough remuneration to fullfil my necessities and desires.
Second, university is the stage which allows to learn from scholar professors.
Teaching provided by professors comes from their experience, years of spending time
to expertise in specified field and combining that with the concepts of book. For instance,
When I was in my 4rth year of Physical Therapy program my erudite professor
taught me manualtechiniques by hands on practice for upper and lower extremities.
After practising that under supervision of my professor, I learned that thoroughly. Due to this
strength, I was accepted in my first interview with outpatient
clinic employer. It is worth saying that possessing excluisve talent can ensure highly demanding job.
In conclusion, due to numerous concrete benefits of accomplishing university education especially financial stability
and job security, it is imperative for people to attend university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70893371758 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04905400261 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63976945245 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0105941649 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.263157895 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.53405017921 573% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204970443805 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066080338519 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112006105838 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543784678308 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110514406132 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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