Most centuries important part of education have remained such as reading ,writing and Math with the advent of computer .some people think that computers can be made as fourth skill to be added to the list.
What extent agree ot disagreee
In Modern era, education is important part of life full stop in that time reading, writing and Maths important for student but computer is also basic need for students while other think computer is also important for schools I agree with former statement. I will discuss my views with upcoming paragraphs.<br>
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In modern era , every schools give best knowledge to students such as writing, reading ,maths. Students bring lots of knowledge , but thr computer is most important part of life.every institute give knowledge of computer to students. Because nowadays , thr person doing all work on computer, they donot doing work manually like acccounting, billing. Because thr technology is very fast so if the institute give knowledge of computer to students . So the people bring much confidence in our life and they donot threat for compitition of fast face life. <br>
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Furthermore, there are many multinational companies are in my country. it provide lot of opportunities to Peoples for computer jobs. if a person have knowledge of computer and a company give job to person you will a computer is inhance our knowledge because you fast face life , technology give lots of things , every work is depend on computers.<br>
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In paradoxical side, education is essential for human if the person have knowledge of computer so the person has stand in good position in our life it is school, colleges providing good knowledge of computer so the student do not threat any condition of life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31174089069 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22542650905 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542510121457 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.856422294 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.777777778 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157422034736 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722610181785 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638709346525 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115152880898 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049461936156 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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