For centuries mportant part of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths with the advent of computers. some people think that computer skill be made as four skills to be added to the list
In what extent do you agree or dissagree
In the modernisation era, education is become the dire need of the people not only for individual growth but for country growth also. From many decades, three skills are essential part of the education such as reading, penning and math but with the arrival of computer some people assert that it should added in the education system as a fourth skill while others condemn about this statement. I agree with the former statement which I will portray in the following subsequent segment.
There are multifarious reasons which can propitious to my view point. The predominate reason is that to survive in the modern word it is mandatory to have knowledge about the computer because in the word in which people are living doing all their work with the help of computer whether they are businessmen, Banker ,lawyer etcetera. Nowadays everything is going to computerise and people prefer to work on computers rather than manually. Because of these reasons, it is vital to giving them knowledge about computer in their infancy age. For instance, the President of India has announced that he will make the Digital India that everything will be computerised in the future so to get job in the future it is essential to have knowledge about computer.
Leaping further, if people have no knowledge about computer then they would become lacked as compare to their peers and will not able to get lucrative jobs in the future due to this, government ought to be made computer as a fourth skill in the education system to get the immense benefits and for thrive the career of the learners.In this way, the level of country economy will also tanscent.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that computer ought to be the forth skill so that all children get the knowledge about it and ward off themselves from detrimental effects and show their superiority in all over the world otherwise it will ruin the future of the people and shook the whole country progress and becomes the havoc for the particular nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84090909091 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57769256641 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.454970596 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.4 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246896174158 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915775794603 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734512920871 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15620636624 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652953823554 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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