It is thought by some that is school teachers role is to motivate and inspire student. However other people believe that teachers primary role is to pass on knowledge
What do you think is the role of children
Teachers plays an important role to 6 as the children life. Some people think that teachers are motivate to children's first story so that people generate the good future. But some people believe The mentor is our past their knowledge to students.in my opinion, the owners password to efforts for doing studies and stand and good position in their life. I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs.
Premier Li, teachers too many airports for student that learners bring good marks in their exams and they motivate the children because the children's goes time for study it is a golden chance for student, if the time was going on their hands, then the time was not come again. so that Ways teacher give the modern values to the children, because students passed more time with teachers in the school.
Or other hand, some people think that the matter is our place my role in their children live. They just give knowledge to children in the school. They do not do many efforts for the children success.
In my opinion, teachers and children's do many efforts for success in their life. If there school teacher give knowledge and teach in good way to children so that children learn in better way and they were achieve their goals in their life. But if they teacher was not concentrate their children in class, so that children do not do not concentrate in their life because they were not serious in life as well as studies also .
In conclusion , every people have their own views. I do not deny any of them. If the people make up for it in their life most of the people bring good practice in their life and teachers praise and appoint are not in their children's life. Because the children was infant ,The parents were go through their children in teachers and then the papers were more time spent on school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'motivated'.
Suggestion: motivated
...fe. Some people think that teachers are motivate to childrens first story so that people...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he mentor is our past their knowledge to students.in my opinion, the owners passw...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...owledge to students.in my opinion, the owners password to efforts for doing studies a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ands, then the time was not come again. so that Ways teacher give the modern valu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot come again. so that Ways teacher give the modern values to the children, becau...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...achers and childrens do many efforts for success in their life. If there school t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ldren learn in better way and they were achieve their goals in their life. But if they ...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'do not'.
Suggestion: do not
...eir children in class, so that children do not do not concentrate in their life because they ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... not serious in life as well as studies also . In conclusion , every people have ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... serious in life as well as studies also . In conclusion , every people have th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns life. Because the children was infant ,The parents were go through their childr...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e children was infant ,The parents were go through their children in teachers and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63777089783 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21469219949 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433436532508 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7741162997 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284198583974 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123880485039 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794650118465 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196202834474 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603673898672 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.