Nowadays,computers cause more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Since the advent of computers in societies,it was expected to enhance the productivity and creativity
among people from all walks of life. The question of whether computers lead to a more productive
and innovative society has generated a great deal of heated debate among scientists and sociologists.
The popular belief seems to be that computers pave the way for more imaginative feats. I cannot but
agree with this view for scientific and social reasons.
First and foremost it is a well-established fact that computers can increase the quality of education.
Simply put, pupils can benefit from cutting-edge technology to enhance their acquaintance with
science,art and technology. In fact, rarely can we see a student who uses computer and cannot think
out of the box.
More significantly, not only computers play a colossal role in increasing the level of education,but also
they contribute to scientific achievements which in turn are cornerstones of productivity. It goes without
saying that researchers and scientists rely on the abilities of their computers to prove their hypothesis.
Another compelling argument in support of the benefits of computers could be the fact that they are
easy-to-use. In other words,inasmuch as computers are user-friendly, they are highly prevalent among
students,manufacturers and scientists.Under this scenario,computer is an interface between science
and industry which leads to a higher level of productivity along with creativity.
Having considered all sides, I conclude that computers have facilitated productivity and enhanced creativity
due to reasons such as increasing the quality of education,leading to further scientific achievements and
being an interface which connects students, scientists and manufacturers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88549618321 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6582092877 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3042621088 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154237583527 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626741514955 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047926096347 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495424039164 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492541253721 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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