Some tourists tend to stay in resorts and enjoy prepared facilities, others like to travel around country and visit people and know about their customs. Which one is the best for both tourists and native people?
Over the past couple of decades, the rate of tourism has risen at a remarkable rate among people from all
walks of life. The question of whether tourists should spend their time indoor and enjoy the facilities and amenities of their hotel or travel around the country to visit people and city has generated a heated debate among tourists. The popular belief seems to be that tourists should travel around the country to be more familiar with people. I cannot but agree with this view for social and cultural reasons.
First and foremost, it is a well-established fact that travelling around a country makes tourists acquainted with
inhabitants' local way of life. Simply put, tourists will be familiar with rites and rituals which are prevalent in that
region. In fact, rarely can we see a tourist who travels around a country and not familiarize with indigenous people's traditions.
More significantly, not only can travelling around a country make tourists familiar with native people's customs,
but also it makes them open-minded. Indeed, tourists as well as native people can broaden their horizon via exchanging ideas with those who have different cultures and believes. Thus, it only makes sense not to stay in hotel and go around the country.
Another compelling argument in support of this view could be the fact that travelling around a country
makes tourists worldly and well-rounded. Evidently, tourist will come across various issues and learn how
to address them independently.
Having considered all sides, I conclude that tourists should travel around the destination country due to
reasons such as familiarity with native people's customs, expanding their outlook and becoming versatile
and worldly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...e among people from all walks of life. The question of whether tourists should spend their time indoor...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a country makes tourists acquainted with inhabitants local way of life. Simply pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30909090909 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6997251161 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9713056889 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336859078089 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130868628869 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070681107868 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135555492866 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766645950476 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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