Nowadays,computers have caused more problems than benefits in societies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the advent of computers in societies,it was expected to enhance the productivity and creativity
among people from all walks of life.The question of whether computers lead to a more productive
and innovative society has generated a great deal of heated debate among scientists and sociologists.
The popular belief seems to be that computers pave the way for more imaginative feats.I cannot but
agree with this view for scientific and social reasons.
First and foremost it is a well-established fact that computers can increase the quality of education.
Simply put,pupils can benefit from cutting-edge technology to enhance their acquaintance with
science,art and technology.In fact, rarely can we see a student who uses computer and cannot think
out of the box.
More significantly,not only computers play a colossal role in increasing the level of education,but also
they contribute to scientific achievements which in turn are cornerstones of productivity.It goes without
saying that researchers and scientists rely on the abilities of their computers to prove their hypothesis.
Another compelling argument in support of the benefits of computers could be the fact that they are
easy-to-use.In other words,inasmuch as computers are user-friendly,they are highly prevalent among
students,manufacturers and scientists.Under this scenario,computer is an interface between science
and industry which leads to a higher level of productivity along with creativity.
Having considered all sides,I conclude that computers have facilitated productivity and enhanced creativity
due to reasons such as increasing the quality of education,leading to further scientific achievements and
being an interface which connects students,scientists and manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13492063492 5.00649968141 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87678713087 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7207385358 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.857142857 104.977214359 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.9669160288 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144634556425 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687551696488 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171888982023 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442808394337 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355517206122 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 12.6369458128 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 53.1260098522 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.9458128079 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.87 11.5310837438 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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