Nowadays,computers have caused more problems than benefits in societies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nce the advent of computers in societies,it was expected to enhance the productivit...
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...ty among people from all walks of life.The question of whether computers lead to a...
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Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...ty among people from all walks of life.The question of whether computers lead to a more productive an...
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...pave the way for more imaginative feats.I cannot but agree with this view for sc...
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...se the quality of education. Simply put,pupils can benefit from cutting-edge technolog...
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...enhance their acquaintance with science,art and technology.In fact, rarely can we s...
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...ntance with science,art and technology.In fact, rarely can we see a student who u...
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...ink out of the box. More significantly,not only computers play a colossal role in ...
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...ole in increasing the level of education,but also they contribute to scientific ach...
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...n turn are cornerstones of productivity.It goes without saying that researchers ...
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... be the fact that they are easy-to-use.In other words,inasmuch as computers are u...
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...hat they are easy-to-use.In other words,inasmuch as computers are user-friendly,they are...
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...,inasmuch as computers are user-friendly,they are highly prevalent among students,ma...
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...hey are highly prevalent among students,manufacturers and scientists.Under this scenario,comp...
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... students,manufacturers and scientists.Under this scenario,computer is an interface ...
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...urers and scientists.Under this scenario,computer is an interface between science and in...
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...eativity. Having considered all sides,I conclude that computers have facilitate...
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...h as increasing the quality of education,leading to further scientific achievements and ...
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...ing an interface which connects students,scientists and manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in fact, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13492063492 5.00649968141 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87678713087 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7207385358 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.857142857 104.977214359 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.9669160288 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144634556425 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687551696488 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171888982023 0.071462118173 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442808394337 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355517206122 0.0609392437508 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 12.6369458128 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 53.1260098522 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.9458128079 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.87 11.5310837438 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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