Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In recent days in many modern societies people are going to consumerism behaviors. In that situations people faced on problems with budget and their needs. However, government should advice societies to avoiding consumerism behaviors. There can be several reasons for this behavior, problems like that on the societies are principally related to incorrect behavior issue.
According to investigates that this situations how led people to fall in to debt. People are wanted to buy things that they do not need and can not avoid own behavior. Credit cards are play major role in this situation. Using credit cards people can buy many things and then pay that. So society expense on unnecessary things. And then society not only buys anything's they did not want it but also fall in more debt. Moreover advertisements are impressed people to buying things that are not so essential.
Advertisement plays a major role on this situation. Advertisements can effort on people behavior to change their attentions on essential. Such that unfair war on people minds when they just see some repeated advertisement in every situations advertisements make unnecessary things as essential things. So people fall in unwanted cycle of needs and debt gets in to debt in this reason.
As a result capitalism system; some people get in to debt by buying things they do not need. But government can take some necessary actions to provide society behavior in this situation. So governments can advices advertisement system and cultures behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'investigate'.
Suggestion: investigate
...correct behavior issue. According to investigates that this situations how led people to ...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ssue. According to investigates that this situations how led people to fall in to...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...not want it but also fall in more debt. Moreover advertisements are impressed people to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23983739837 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87883239987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516260162602 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8373250631 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6111111111 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356491145094 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123825221111 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804372343493 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238765681208 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442128288981 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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