From the last 100 years, which invention is the most important: the internet, the car or E2Language?
Choose which invention you think is the most important and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from
your own experience, observations or reading.
Since the beginning of the 20th century, several inventions have been discovered such as cars, computers, internet and E2Language. Some people believe that the invention of the internet is the most important, while others argue that the cars invention is more importance. This essay will discuss the reason why the invention of the internet is the greatest invention in the last 100 years.
Firstly, invention of the internet is the greatest invention in the last 100 years because it enables human to communicate easily. Using the internet has helped people to contact others much easier than the past. For example, sending a letter between two countries in the past was taking around six months, but now using the internet, people can communicate much faster using different applications such as e-mail, Skype, and Facebook. Therefore, it seems clear the the invention of the internet is very important because it helps people to communicate just in few seconds.
Secondly, invention of the internet is important in the last century because it contributes significantly on improving the world economy. Using the internet has helped people to purchase and sell their products much easier. Recent research, which was conducted in the USA, has shown that 99% of American people use the internet websites to purchase their clothes and homes appliances, and this consequently has led to rise the world economy. Thus, the invention of the internet has helped people to obtain their necessary products easily and developing the world economy which makes it the most important invention in the last century.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why the invention of the internet is regarded very important in the last 100 years. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the internet invention has contributed on enhancing human lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72266726746 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474747474747 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.546737267 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279624183746 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125741218663 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886205859827 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199811171672 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641906895701 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.