The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a diagram providing clear information about Glarsdon town, as well as two potential areas proposed for building a supermarket.
It is evident that Garlsdon is surrounded by countrysides, namely Hinsdon, Bransdon and Gransdon, with the estimated population of 65 000 people. At first glance, both the proposed sites are easily accessible as there are railway tracks and main roads. Despite S2 being located in the town centre, private vehicles are not permitted around that area. In contrast, consumers can access to the supermarket as S1 by private vehicle as there are no imposed rules on...
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