Many criminals commit for the crimes as soon as the released from prison?
What do you think are the causes.
What possible solutions can you suggest .
Nowadays in many countries, the crime rate is at a mammoth rate. Once the criminal is set free from the prison, they will do the crime again. There are numerous reasons which are responsible for uprooting the problem. However, some solvents are there to curb this problem. I will portray its factors and remedies in following segments.
The predominant reason of this is, many criminals are not born offenders but the circumstances often incite them to commit a felony. When such unpremeditated convicts are came out from prisons, they are expelled from the society and isolated from their own families. Due to this, they inclined to recommit the crimes. In addition, after releasing from prisons, to sustain life criminals find it very difficult to get the job because of their criminal record. For instance, in India, if any one want to acquire the job, it is essential that applicant do not have any record of indulging in any criminal activities. Because of this reason, they again indulged in illegal practices to earn their livelihood to sustain life such as robbing, thefting etcetera and sometime they became serious killers in their life.
However, there are some solvants to eradicate this problem. Primarily, it is the responsibility of the government that they should urge people that they should not expelled the criminals. Besides this, people should give an another chance to criminals to usher the new life. Subsequently, offenders should get a chance to show their superiority among the people. In addition, government should make some arrangements in the prison, to give the offenders some technical or other things training so that after releasing from prison, delinquents use their skills to combat with the hurdles of their life.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that there is a need to understand the gravity of the problem and address it before it gets too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... such unpremeditated convicts are came out from prisons, they are expelled fro...
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Line 4, column 493, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...inal record. For instance, in India, if any one want to acquire the job, it is essentia...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'expel'
Suggestion: expel
... urge people that they should not expelled the criminals. Besides this, people sho...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a chance' or 'another chance'.
Suggestion: a chance; another chance
...inals. Besides this, people should give an another chance to criminals to usher the new life. Sub...
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Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...uperiority among the people. In addition, government should make some arrangemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12074303406 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86857768499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9609972927 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13539185084 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449257333128 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505907592186 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815802858274 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462079929527 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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