maps Cambridge 12 test 6 task 1
The two maps illustrate the present outlines of the town center of Islap and its planned improvements
Overall it can be inferred that, the main changes are: adding two new housing areas, encircling the town center with a ring road and constructing a car park and a bus station.
Currently, the center of the town is crossed by the main road horizontally with two shops area along both sides. Countryside is located in the north of the street while the housing area is on the south. There are two blind ended small roads, one is to reach the school, on the south-west of the housing area, while the other is to reach the park, which is on the east of this residency area.
It is planned to replace the main road with a dual carriageway encircling the shopping area, park and most of the housing area. The countryside will be enclosed within the ring to join the previous area of shops, which was present on the north of the old main motorway to provide: new housing area (with its specific street) on the east, a car park (just on it's west) , shopping center and a bus station on the west.
The old main road will be available for the pedestrians use only, while the south shops area will remain the same. Another new housing area will be built on the west of the park just south-east to the shops
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly, the center of the town is crossed by the main road horizontally with two shop...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'blinds'?
Suggestion: blinds
...ing area is on the south. There are two blind ended small roads, one is to reach the ...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on the east, a car park just on its west , shopping center and a bus station on th...
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Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
...e pedestrians use only, while the south shops area will remain the same. Another new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45188284519 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33653054763 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44769874477 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.640184426 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0107569213479 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00468383447426 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0123922612011 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0147149492212 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294298984424 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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