Television has changed the quality of life for an ordinary person. Do you agree or disagree ???
n the wake of technological advancement , Television proved to be an effective way of media. I agree that people's quality of life has been affected by TV programs in many aspects. This will be shown by analyzing how TV impacted watchers' cultural and foreign language deficiency as well as person's life style.
Firstly, TV shows helps audience to acquire brief overview about how inhabitants of other parts of the world live. Nowadays, with the availability of satellites, each TV screen can display various shows and documentary movies done by people from other nationalities and cultural backgrounds. These would help individuals to get to know about traditions, life style and beliefs of other communities , and thus narrow the cultural gap between societies. Such Information were hardly to get before invention of TV. For instance, I knew a lot about the Chinese customs from watching the famous TV series, The Orientals. Furthermore, TV comprises an invaluable tool for teaching foreign languages. There are bunch of programs produced in diverse languages by native speakers around the world which would assist in learning the proper pronunciation and vocabulary. Personally, I used to watch a well-known TV show, namely Mind Your Language, to master the British accent. On the other hand, in the pre-TV era people would travel overseas or mingle with tourists to attain the same benefit. Clearly, the aforementioned benefits would have been difficult to gain in the pre-TV period.
Secondly, watching TV transformed the life style of people. The TV is considered as an enticing recreation time for many, therefore some people started to have some sort of addiction to TV and attend it in excess on daily basis ; As a result, those people become gradually less physically active. A survey done by Cambridge university in 2016 found that 50% of adults spent 3-4 hours-a-day in front of TV screens. Additionally, TV affected the social interaction between people. In the past decades, as told by my grandparents, when there was no TV , people used to meet each other in their free time and make friendships. In contrast, nowadays there is an increasing tendency among people to choose TV over going out, eventually they might become socially secluded. Hence, it is obvious how the TV altered the active and social life style of certain proportion of people.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the introduction of TV has brought changes to human life in both positive and negative ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, mind you, sort of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14039408867 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90287863037 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2358672307 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.380952381 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111721663941 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378744248727 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448225151971 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933239724874 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584052246449 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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