You borrowed some books from your school/college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
I am the student of your esteemed college, who is the part of MCA department. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to feel sorry to you about the books, I borrowed from the library and unable to pay back at the particular time.
As, I am a student of MCA and I borrowed three books of "Java" language from the library for the preparation of final exams. According to the bond, I had to return all the books after the exams, which i lent from library. Unfortunately, on the last exam, I received a call from my cousin about the major accident of my aunt. Indeed, my cousin is studying in abroad, so, it was not possible for him to come in India in such a short spam of time. Besides this, my uncle was out of town because of some business meeting. Due to these reasons, I had to immediately go to look after her in the hospital, because there was no one, who could able to take care of her.
Moreover, I think that it would take one week, but after it doctor informed me that she in the critical condition and she takes at least one week more to cover up.
Yours sincerely
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rn all the books after the exams, which i lent from library. Unfortunately, on th...
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was no one, who could able to take care of her. Moreover, I think that it wo...
^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more to cover up. Yours sincerely Aman
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, moreover, so, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29383886256 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47338883798 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6153817716 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160080067066 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580874353686 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505294060396 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901236681773 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647210564335 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.