In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undeniable fact that the health deteriorating issues are escalating because of consuming too much junk food, and therefore, rising tax on such industries isn’t the reliable solution, whereas, there are other remedies by which it is possible to decrease the use of fast food. I think prohibition on advertise industries and social awareness program can be more effective than imposing tax.
Firstly, the growing of advertisement industries in the field of food marketing has been rising rapidly since last decade; the people in the US switched their mind from home made food into readymade food, also, they find it tasty and less tired approach to meet their food demand. However, the severe consequences of such food on their health are questionable. I think the state should intervene and strictly ban over these advertisement rather than imposing more tax on such product.
Secondly, the severity of job around the globe has increased dramatically, no one cry for fresh food rather they look for easy available food without noticeable side effects of such food items. For instance, In Pakistan around 70% people do take lunch outside their homes due to frantic job environment the preference of people has flipped from fresh food into junk food.
Lastly, the rising of tax on food items will not yield fruitful solution; in this case financial crises of the local people will increase subsequently health problems will go up instead of going down. Therefore, the preferable step would be ban on marketing industries instead awareness program shall be printed in order to get rid of such problems permanently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'these advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; these advertisements
... should intervene and strictly ban over these advertisement rather than imposing more tax on such p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19318181818 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73609421389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6090491758 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.333333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256779519352 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105295462511 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521141884513 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154364611274 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318245589905 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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