You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Wali,
I am writing to thank you and all the staff who worked for my grandfather’s 90th birthday party on February 28th.
Last Sunday evening, I organized a party in your hotel for my grandfather’s 90th birthday. Over 100 guests came to celebrate and most of them were elderly people. The party began at 7:00PM with a representation of my father, and then my grandfather came onto the stage and blew candles on a huge cake when people began to sing “Happy Birthday to you”. After the cake cutting, people start to enjoy the buffet in a harmony atmosphere.
I appreciate your concern for the elderly guests and low-fat and low-calories food were served. The dining place was decorated beautifully with my grandfather’s favorite flowers and the waiters and waitresses were polite to the elderly guests and helped them to find the right seats. I feel so thankful for your help and all the staff. I would like to use your hotel for my next party plan in the near future.
Thank you again and best wishes to all the staff at PC Hotel.
Yours faithfully,
Tehseen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... PC Hotel. Yours faithfully, Tehseen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97037203133 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4670695621 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305395533377 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122320043691 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958303464827 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189605815161 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508374097617 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.