Teacher's Salaries Should be based on their students’ Academic Performance.
There are lot of changes have been happened with the discoveries and invention, but those changes have been made on the basis of Education and learning system. Education to Human being not only helped individually to grow but also helped society to promote it presence. From the initial we have been taught that the relation between Teacher and student is the only relation who is pure and free from corruption in the world. Teacher is only who mold the life of student and support the student for his bright future. Teachers are the one who learn the discipline, Respect and behavior in the society. We have seen a lot of examples where teacher had played a significant role for the betterment of student, from the Socrates to Plato to Aristotle where they have shown a significant importance of philosophy or from the Great Hindu epic Mahabharata's Dronacharya and Arjuna respect between each other and discipline to learn the new abilities.
So the statement which states Teacher's salary should be based on their students’ academic Performance seems completely not agreeable and the result of which will cause the ruin of students’ life and whole Mankind.
If educational Institution has started paying Salaries of teachers on the basis of students’ Performance then the teacher will start teaching only those parts of the subject which will help student to score good grades and will abandon the rest of educational curriculum. This kind of education system will not provide the basic of those curriculum to students and will never understand the importance of their curriculum in there standard and thus will lead student in danger of losing the capability of critical and logical thinking. This will create a system like selling of only those products which will produce more profits and leave the rest, here the teacher will teach only those parts of the course which afford student to get good grades and help teacher to receive a handsome salary. There would be no new talk of creative thinking and benefit of human mankind. Therefore the teacher shouldn't be provided such a privilege where the relation of teacher and student will convert into give and take system.
In addition to it, here the education system will change the phase and fate of student and society, where they will get manufacture from manufacturing hub (Education system).They taught to focus to only things which are beneficial to them and learn only those which will give good grade and leave the rest of educational curriculum. Keeping this in mind if they grow then definitely they will acquire skill where they will only think of their own benefit and leave the problem of the society or environment for others. Now the adults of student does become crueller and only think of ourselves results in increasing rate of crime and cause destruction to mankind and the natural environment. Therefore might be this effect will reflect in some ten to twenty years but if this kind of education system started then definitely the temporary benefit of teacher will ruin the whole mankind.
Succinctly, Teachers should get paid on their academic skill rather than students’ academic performance. Also they should be getting taught to understand the changing cognitive skill of upcoming future students and promote them for their betterment which will indirectly help our human mankind to afford better life.
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Message: Did you mean 'this curriculum' or 'those curricula', 'those curriculums'?
Suggestion: this curriculum; those curricula; those curriculums
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
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Message: Did you mean 'focusing', 'focussing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: focusing; focussing
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...to mankind and the natural environment. Therefore might be this effect will reflect in so...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...rectly help our human mankind to afford better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2856.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 559.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1091234347 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65081512571 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436493738819 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 885.6 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3999292533 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0555555556 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283729523111 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114520637906 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139040490266 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234198849108 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163761619549 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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