Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?
Technology has impacted every aspect of our life and the way we do study and business are not the exception. Owing to this, many business meeting and trainings nowadays are held online. Now the question arises is whether they are beneficial or not. I am more inclined to the first part that doing they have more advantages than disadvantages due to the flexibility of work and education that it gives to the employees and students.
For one, online information exchanges bring flexibility of work location and time to the individual. Now, if needed, they can also work from home, which not only saves their commutation time but also helps them to spend some more time with their family, thereby, boosting(increasing) their productivity. In India, for example, many IT companies are providing option of working from home to their employees. This could be possible only due to the possibility of meeting and discussions happening over calls. In addition to that, it is extremely useful for business growth as well since people from different geographical locations can now work together as a team. Companies can take advantage of hiring people from different places of globe based on factors such as per capita salary and closeness to client location etc. As these benefits are in interest of many, online business meetings are education are gaining popularity these days.
On the other hand, this trend has few disadvantages as well. Some people argue that they find it difficult to explain or understand(comprehend) the discussions in online meetings. As they believe, it is easy for people to explain everything in better way if meetings are held in person (in case of face-to-face discussions). Furthermore, they believe that sometime voice over phone-calls is not clear or audible. Admittedly, these problems exist but can be easily solved, for instance, by switching to different network provider or having video conference calls.
After looking at both sides, it is believed that advantages of online meetings overweigh its disadvantages. Hence, I believe in future, more and more meetings and trainings would be happening over calls as this would be in benefit to not only the individuals but to the business as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15745856354 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96661547262 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1849505028 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214105757029 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706053959434 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769727001754 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142262827714 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656765559472 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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