More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?
Most of the people living in urban sectors with congested houses and no backyard facilities like gardens, free resting area and so on. Owing to the fact, I think it is a detrimental effect on to the people who live and the surroundings such as psychological issues and health problems.
To begin with, people located in city centers does not have enough space to move on, relax and do their hobbies etc, such factors may affect on their daily living and mood stability and that would leads to mental problems such as mood disorders and characters. For instance, lack of privacy may alter their behaviour to other members and that would leads to problems inside the house not only that, minimal chance to listen music or do some instrumental players would suffocate the people who lived in also. Furthermore, children have not space to play and poor knowledge regarding the farms, flowers and mainly about ecosystem.Moreover,When we consider about health of the people,lot of chances will be there to flood of diseases like respiratory or communicable diseases. Minimal chance to isolate such patients and spread of diseases risen every second. For example,, a house with small space obviously share the single bathroom and kitchen.
When we considered about house rent usage of electricity and water might be low if we are using small space to live. Along with that, occupy more people in one shelter would be consume extra space for others.Although such elements may used to reduce the humidity and exhaust the congested air in other ways like continues use of air condition or exhaust fan,
In conclusion, small living space in the city makes numerous problems in everyday life of such community. In my perception occupying small area to live would be more contraindicated than positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83958896877 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5923811623 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.8 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249550243641 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973512875323 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553848431643 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162758906601 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459662695307 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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