it is more important to have a good family than to have friends . Family can always compensate for absence of friendships.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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It is often argued that friends cannot r...
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...hat friends cannot replace a well family,meanwhile parents are able to compensate. I comp...
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...te. I completely agree with opinion and,I think that family relationship is much ...
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...is much more important than friends. First of all,I believe that people canno...
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...ant than friends. First of all,I believe that people cannot live far to ...
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...ve that people cannot live far to family,his need it.Even if, someone has many frien...
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...e cannot live far to family,his need it.Even if, someone has many friends, ...
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...ed it.Even if, someone has many friends, but feels sad and failing all the day.Th...
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... but feels sad and failing all the day.This person doesnt a good family to keep wit...
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...sad and failing all the day.This person doesnt a good family to keep with him,while su...
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...on doesnt a good family to keep with him,while succeeding ...
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...family to keep with him,while succeeding in the society his objective.For example...
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... in the society his objective.For example,street kids got a lot of friend...
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...in the society his objective.For example,street kids got a lot of friends,but have a ba...
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...example,street kids got a lot of friends,but have a bad life style and doesnt study....
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...f friends,but have a bad life style and doesnt study. Thats why its more important to...
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...ave a bad life style and doesnt study. Thats why its more important to have a well p...
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...t to have a well parents than friends. Secondly,family can always compens...
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Suggestion: , family
...arents than friends. Secondly,family can always compensate all friends,she g...
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...family can always compensate all friends,she gives her son their needs.It is clear,t...
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...l friends,she gives her son their needs.It is clear,that there is strong relations...
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...he gives her son their needs.It is clear,that there is strong relationship between ev...
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Suggestion: Parents
...tionship between everyone in the family.Parents are following these children for many p...
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...ng these children for many problems then achieve a better result in the school as...
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... in the school as well as in their life.For instance,many research said that a good...
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...ol as well as in their life.For instance,many research said that a good family rela...
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...l as well as in their life.For instance,many research said that a good family relationship ...
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...ce,many research said that a good family relationship can help people to success ...
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...can help people to success in their life,despite all they have friends.Thus,advantages o...
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...heir life,despite all they have friends.Thus,advantages of parents can always repl...
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... life,despite all they have friends.Thus,advantages of parents can always replace every p...
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...e friends.Thus,advantages of parents can always replace every people close to the...
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...ace every people close to their son. In conclusion,I strongly believe that th...
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...close to their son. In conclusion,I strongly believe that the family is mor...
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...f family relationship than to friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30487426048 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.747955644 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284460196243 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161977718874 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807167129836 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122496075584 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761700588697 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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