Scientist tell us about the activities which are good for our health and other which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is? And what can be done to change it?
In today's modern world, thanks to the achievable studies done by researchers, most people are aware about beneficial and detrimental hobbies. However, they are still involved in unhealthy activities, which stems from a range of underlying reasons. Admittedly, there could be some measurements to tackle this problem, which will be discussed.
There are several factors behind the mentioned fact. Firstly, although ordinary folk know about the consequences of their harmful hobbies, they could not avoid doing them simply because they enjoy. For example, eating fast food, which is inseparable part of people's life. For this group of society personal fulfilment is much more vital than being healthy. Secondly, being under extra pressure in today's fast-paced lifestyle, many people are looking for a way which can alleviate their stress and tensions. Therefore, they knowingly embrace unhealthy actions such as smoking and drinking alcohol just to name a few. Finally, for a significant percentage of community, including me, being engaged in sedentary lifestyle, which is obviously detrimental for overall health, is inevitable as they have to prioritize their work position on top of their health condition.
However, both families and governments can take positive steps into account to address this issue. Children principally take after their parents in terms of hobbies and behavior. So, if they have suitable role-models and are taught from an early age to choose healthy lifestyle, they are less likely to do useless pastimes. At the same time, local councils need to take on the larger proportion of the responsibility. It means that not only should they provide the public with enough recreational possibilities like sport complexes to replace disturbing hobbies, but they also ought to enforce restrict rules to deter people from doing harmful actions.
In conclusion, although it seems that people got used to doing unhealthy activities, this condition can be changed by mutual cooperation between families and governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51757188498 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8115633162 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661341853035 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6865905045 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278655918238 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827890053375 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598806862443 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182320394187 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663161900961 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.