Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain why the center is important for the local community
Describe the possible effect on loval people of the centre closes.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter tonraose concern abouy the decision of closing sports and leisure centre.I am one of the memeber of this club and residing on ground floor number L-3.
Starting from my family, me and my wife using sport ground to play badminton as we both are working and have sitting job in addition to it my children are using it to play football in safe enviroment. My friend using leisure club to spend evening and have little chit-chat.
Moreover it will help society to be in fit and in shape, people using centre to enjoy evening amd have walk which help them to relax after day job. If you closed the club it will impact whole community as there is no place near by to spend time and play, even children do not have safe place near by to play which could impact their health.
I would request you to reconsider your decision.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...on of closing sports and leisure centre.I am one of the memeber of this club and ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d evening and have little chit-chat. Moreover it will help society to be in fit and i...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'walked'.
Suggestion: walked
... using centre to enjoy evening amd have walk which help them to relax after day job....
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ct whole community as there is no place near by to spend time and play, even children d...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...y, even children do not have safe place near by to play which could impact their health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65030674847 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20785604745 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5149975416 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128797447151 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747769694413 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506881303729 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773899402631 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404000691149 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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