The space travel is excellent these day, but there are many environmental problems in our planet we should tackle the problems but not travel space and spend a lot of money. Discuss this opinion.
These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about the space missions and the huge money spent on such explorations. Many countries are sending their own satellites for different purposes. However, many critics tend to believe that planet earth is facing many ongoing environmental problems and we must solve it while many other support the space travel. In this essay, I shall analyze both sides of this argument before presenting a plausible conclusion.
First of all, wealthy nations along with united nations must spend a hefty amount of budget for the development of third world countries. Nowadays, paucity of food, unemployment, pollution, emission of toxic gases are the soaring concerns for the inhabitants of the world. For instance, in Africa many children die due to unhygienic drinking water because of contamination from toxic contents. Therefore, instead of spending money in space missions authorities must initiate to solve these problems which are not only damaging our environment but effecting our future generations.
On the other hand, strong proponents of space travel have a different point of view. Firstly, they claim that space missions brought a revolution in the world of communications via satellites and everybody got benefited. Moreover, living space in this world is decreasing day by day because of higher growth rate, space missions are trying to find an inhabitable planet for humans outside the Earth which can help to overcome the population and space issue.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that space travel has enormous benefits but Governments must introduced a balanced budget to solve the ongoing issues of our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82470706116 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6624085606 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360117588019 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111418692467 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924073897118 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205000850698 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556073304973 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.