You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during the holidays you decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the museum. In your letter:
.introduce yourself
.explain what experience and special skills you have
.explain why you are interested in the job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to the employment posting which you have posted in Todays Times newspaper dated November 23rd, for the position of clerk in accounts department.
I am 30 year old, second year student of arts and doing my project based on architectural and antique monuments, which need to be submitted in the final year.
I had earlier work in Prestigious museum for one year before getting into tertiary education. There I was looking into all clerical works. So after reading your advertisement I was really keen to apply for this vacancy as it is suiting my field as well as interest. I will be delighted if you could consider me for this position.
As I am having holidays for one month starting from next week,that is December 1st, I will be available to join from the date. It will be great experience to work for this museum, as I will gain immense knowledge and the experience gain would be inevitable. It finds me really impressive as I can gain work experience and the salary which would I get can be helpful for me. As I will not have to do part-time job for my basic needs and can concentrate more on my studies.
Awaiting your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra Brown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to be submitted in the final year. I had earlier work in Prestigious museum ...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...ys for one month starting from next week,that is December 1st, I will be available to...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71559633028 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70446204882 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0374006924 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221800815574 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769751006864 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459007768751 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103874783601 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693907660934 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.