People think that improving Road safety will only be possible by increasing the legal age limit for new drivers, do you agree or disagree
Road injuries and even death has been become a creative source of concern in countries all around the globe. To eradicate that problem, some people assert that elevate the legal age limit for authorise the driving license is the only way. However, I deem that, there are more another effective ways to make the roads a safer place. I will portray my view points in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, augmenting the age limit is not a viable solution to solve the road accident problems, because there is no legal evidence which shows that most of the accidents take place because of the youngsters. There are another reasons which are responsible for occurring the accidents on the road,such as break the traffic lights, drive the car after taking alcohol substances, rash driving etcetera.
On the paradoxical side, there is a plethora of solution which are propitious to curb the accident problem at some extent. Predominantly, regime should enforce severe driving rules to ward off the citizens from the road injuries. If anyone break the rules instead of following them, then they ought to give the high penalty, for instance, a chunk of money, make them jail birds for sometime, suspend their license etcetera. Apart of this, new type of vehicles which will work on the basis of computer instructions are just around the corner of launching. As a result, it can decrease the human involvement in driving. To give a clear example, Volvo trucks are available in some countries which work automatically, indeed, sensors are installed in them, when they found any accident will take place, they automatically give the instructions and then it stops the vehicle instantly.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my opinion that a lack of road safety is due to much more than just young drivers, indeed, people of all ages make errors on the roads for a variety of reasons. The best way to make the roads safe is to make the strict driving rules and use the automatic vehicles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92537313433 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61251848611 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3627379727 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185861692472 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602152672565 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611818719739 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120193808068 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438993201102 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.