Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward.
mention what they have done to help the community.
say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to the recent advertisement in your newspaper regarding community service related reward. I want to make you aware about my english teacher, Mr. Sanjay Sharma who I believe is worthy enough to receive this prestigious award.
Using his spare time in the evenings, he has shown tremendous results to clean city’s beaches and ponds from all possible sort of garbage. He has completely changed the landscape in southern part of the city. Not only he has removed solid waste from the southern stretch but also has ensured 24 hours surveillance across the beach with help of the police department. In addition, this effort would help aquatic animals and preserve the overall environment in the city.
As a token of thanks and further to encourage his good work, cash reward and a free advertisement campaign to find him volunteers to speed up the cleanliness drive across the district would be best award which can be given to him. It shall motivate him further to continue to achieve more.
Thank you for kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12568306011 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7648761271 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72131147541 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4313890129 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120844418114 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041437011229 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382146387111 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623879955014 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494423143759 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.