Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward.
mention what they have done to help the community.
say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to a reward from Thanh Nien newspaper to people who help to build a better community.
I would like to nominate my best friend, tom, who is also my neighbor. I believe he deserves this reward because he has been working very hard to improve the environment of our neighborhood. I have asked people living in the town about this and everyone confirms tom’s contribution to the local community.
What he does is picking up the trash on the streets in the neighborhood every morning before he goes to work. he then put the garbage in the right place to recycle and dispose of. this seems to be insignificant, however, the environment of my town has vastly improved thanks to his action.
I would suggest that you could dedicate a small section in the newspaper to honor his action. Not only is this an encouragement for tom, it also shows a good example for others to follow. you can also give him money as a reward to make him even happier.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t friend, tom, who is also my neighbor. I believe he deserves this reward because...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve the environment of our neighborhood. I have asked people living in the town ab...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...d every morning before he goes to work. he then put the garbage in the right place...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ws a good example for others to follow. you can also give him money as a reward to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6763817722 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4201993145 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240378284377 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720948865199 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663512311524 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116712364263 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089464411979 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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