You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment.
I your letter:
- give details of the things that were unsatisfactory (untidy bedroom, the bed is uncomfortable to lie on, bit too smal for a tween bed, toilet seat was dirty)
- explain the reactions of the members of your family (wife was complaining all the time, my got a bad backaches when they got home)
- ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation (asking what you do to compensate)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about an apartment arranged by your agents for my family's holiday two weeks ago.
The apartment looked decent with great sea views judging on the outside. however, it was not what we expected as the living room was filled with empty water bottles left by previous customers. I also found problems with the twin beds in the bedrooms. The beds were too small for two adults and they were extremely uncomfortable to sleep.
I could see the disappointment in my wife and children while we were staying there but they decided to compromise and enjoyed the vacation regardless of these unacceptable problems. however, they have been suffering bad backaches ever since we got home 3 days ago and I had to take them to the doctors.
As a dissatisfied customer, I am entitled to request compensation. I want to let you propose first according to your company's policies. If it does not meet my expectation, I will give you my counter-proposition and we can work on an agreement.
I look forward to receiving your response
Yours faithfully
Truong
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-22 | Prajakta003 | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-21 | Stone | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | drtruong92 | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...great sea views judging on the outside. however, it was not what we expected as the liv...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ardless of these unacceptable problems. however, they have been suffering bad backaches...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07396934499 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5936662469 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164582147873 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540916331006 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542070796429 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842494246787 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512329885279 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.