Some people think that the government should decide which subjects student should study at the university , while other think that student should be allowed to apply the subjects they prefer discuss both view and give your opinion
One school of thought that learners should choose their subject which they want.others belive that authorities shouLd
ld select their subject to study at university . Both views have equal importance to make larner future bright. I will discuss both view in following pharagraphs.
To embark with,the availability of choosing subject according to intrest because when learner choose their subject then they can give proper time to their subject and try to collect all type information hope in future they will get success and make professional that particular subject . Moreover,most of persons have their goal those persons have little bit knowledge about goal .when they study on it and get more information about that if somehow they do not know about anything then they can study on it and easily achieve their goals.
On the other hand , government also paly vital role in pupils study because when government apply subjects then they can reduce unemployment and provided job vacancy .if student doing study on that subjects which are applyed by government then they can get easily employment and fulfil basic needs.Apart from that ,if authorities provide subjects then they can balance the importance of every subjects.because most of people follow rat race and follow other people .most of time if happened one person choose a subjects then their peers also follow them so when government provide subjects then student have to studying on it after completeing their study and apply for job where and which job vacancy are empty.
To sum up,both ways are importance but in my opinon student should choose their subjects with their own perception because when they choose according to their choice they study with carefully and get good outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19787985866 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5674075437 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.493496333 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.142857143 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4285714286 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292774314641 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146365772484 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078204235992 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184934398334 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418428368841 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.