technology and new inventions is it beneficial or detrimental to the society?
The ongoing debate on whether technology and new inventions are beneficial to the society was always a debatable topic. Many people state that these developments and innovations made people more comfortable and has positive impact on human life. I strongly agree with the statement that advancements has made our life much easy. This essay would further elaborate the reasons how technology helped us with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, in today's fast running world, each and every day a new innovation or enhancement to existing technologies are being developed. Every advancement has something to show us and it is helpful to mankind in some or other form. There are numerous benefits from these developments in our day to day activities. One among them is invention of computer. Computer has made our people more easy and we are able to retrieve information from online irrespective of the field. For example, computers are used store n number of files according to size and date, information in the files can be edited or added at any point of time with just single click.
Secondly, these technologies had widespread in every field and found in many sectors such as science, medicine, commerce, telecom, communication, media, mobile technology and many more. For example, the recent innovation of smart phones has made our communication much easier. These phones provide a choice of selecting a wide variety of applications such as mobile banking, tourist, groceries, online shopping and many more from play store which helped us to lead our life with comfort and relax.
According to the arguments aforementioned, it can be concluded that advancements and developments are much beneficial to mankind in every field and it is anticipated that there will be more innovations in near future to make our life much easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ast running world, each and every day a new innovation or enhancement to existing technologies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19205298013 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93956195996 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2316088146 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150202438581 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573244524418 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103096548591 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922303143192 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067275049047 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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