Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws, one of the most precious things in the human sociaty, are the wisdom of our ancesters and rulers. In order to protect people, to present justice, and to give peace to society, laws should include all kinds of possible events, although nearly impossible. That is, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. Then, as a result, people will know how to do the right things in every situations, the rights of the population will be guarded more completely, and we can keep the order and maintain rectitude in our country.
First, people can do the ...
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